"The Eleventh Hour" - conclusion
The Doctor and Amy run towards the cricket pavilion, however as they pass the village green a huge eye appears in the sky and they find themselves surrounded by the Guardians. They appear to have no mouths however they are able to speak:
"You are the prisoner. You must be executed."The Doctor realises that they are talking about him:
"Look, I suggest that you think about what you are doing. I am a Time Lord, the last of the Time Lords in fact. You think I am the prisoner because you are detecting residue on me from travelling in time. But that is what I do. Why not analyse me properly."A huge beam of light emenates from the eye and engulfs the Doctor. His clothes evaporate and he is left standing naked . Eventually the light stops.
"You are not the prisoner" the Guardians say.
"Ten out of ten" the Doctor replies.Amy eyes the naked Doctor and nudges him:
"I could say the same from where I'm standing". The Doctor blushes and covers his groin with his hands:
"Kindy return my attire!" he shouts. The clothes suddenly reappear on him:
"Now there is no time to lose. Your prisoner is in that cricket pavilion. Let us commence an arrest."
Entering the pavilion, the Doctor and Amy are shocked to see a pile of dead cricketers and standing behind them is Amy's aunt.
"Please give yourself up" the Doctor pleads. The prisoner scowls.
"I did not create the crack in time. It was created by others. There is a darkness coming".Amy frowns.
"We don't care."The Doctor stares at her:
"You should not be so dismissive of such information. Remember that this isn't your real aunt. *to the Guardians* Please just take your prisoner back into confinement. There is no need for execution, the death penalty just lowers you to the same moral level as the killer themself. However I must speak with this prisoner first about this crack in time".However before he can do so, a bolt of energy from the eye in the sky eliminates the prisoner. Then the Guardians ascend up into the eye and it vanishes.
Later the Doctor, Amy and the Brigadier are discussing recent events in the Red Lion over a drink.
"There should have been another way, there was no need to kill the prisoner" the Doctor states.
"What about this crack in time?" Amy asks.
"I'm very worried Amy. However I assure you that I will try to get to the bottom of it" the Doctor replies.Amy looks at him:
"Can I join you on your travels Doctor? There is so little for me here".The Doctor squeezes her hand:
"Of course. I am so lonely; I've lost so many people close to me. I need company."The Brigadier lightens the mood:
"By the way, I bumped into another former companion of yours last week at my club; Ben Chatham. Splendid chap."The Doctor smiles:
"Ben is one of the best. I must catch up with him.............."
............... the end.
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It would appear that it's been banned from OG. Records of its existence have been wiped.
Presumably they felt is too controversial and potentially infamatory. However it lives on here. More episode re-writes will be posted here.
Perhaps this symbolises an end of an era in terms of your style of writing?
"Perhaps this symbolises an end of an era in terms of your style of writing?"
Not at all.
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May I add you on Facebook?"
It depends on who you are
Why is it GB deleted this thread? Why is it nearly everything which questions the current quality of the show gets deleted. It's growing very tiresome.
"Why is it GB deleted this thread? Why is it nearly everything which questions the current quality of the show gets deleted. It's growing very tiresome."
I've have sensed that since OG became GB there has been less tolerance of critical views. But that could be a misconception on my part. What would annoy me is if the Nuwho zealots were given free range to feign 'offence' at any critical thread.
Sparacus have you considered setting up your own forum?
Sparacus have you considered setting up your own forum?
I have yes but am unsure how to go about it.
I could happily set it all up for you. Just PM me the name you'd want to my GB account and I'll sort it out if you so wish.
You are physically incapable of doing anything without Ben Chatham, aren't you?
Pathetic. You don't deserve THIS blog, let alone to rip off one of mine!
I've just looked at your site Youth of Australia. You've made crap book covers for recent real episodes and put your name as the author. Who's ripping off who?
Well, you obviously haven't been able to get your rancid dog turd of a brain working enough to look at the ebooks I wrote then, have you?
But then, you probably can't read as you are one of the "dim" Sparacus loves to insult from the safety of his blog.
"Rancid dog turd of a brain". What a high brow comment. Not surprising coming from someone who thinks "novelizing" recent TV episodes somehow makes them his property. Rant away Oscar Wilde.
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